Fwa Twa Ou Kriye (EP Rewrite)

Rewrite: A song inspired by the story I'm developing in the second book in my teen urban fantasy series. (Lyrics by me, music by Suno.com)

This was the song that got me into the whole “writing lyrics to get at the emotional value in my story events” thing, but it’s also the shortest and so I tweaked the grammar on the Kreyòl and structured for extended play. I also rendered it on the newer Suno model v5 so it’s a bit better on the duet side. (Original - Full Playlist)

Fwa Twa Ou Kriye (EP)

[Intro]
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[Verse 1 - Kreyòl]
[Man] Ti limyè mwen, premye fwa ou te kriye
Mwen te ba ou kè mwen pou w jwe avè l
[Girl] Ti limyè mwen, dezyèm fwa ou te kriye
Mwen ba ou zepòl mwen pou m siye je w
[Duet] Ti limyè mwen, twazyèm fwa ou te kriye
Mwen te ba ou men m pou m kite w ale
Mwen kite w ale

[Chorus - Humming]
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[Verse 2 - English]
[Girl] Little light of mine, the first time you cried
I gave you my heart for you to play
[Man] Little light of mine, the second time you cried
I gave you my shoulder to dry your eyes
[Duet] Little light of mine, the third time you cried
I gave you my hand to let you go
I let you go-o-o
I let you go

[Chorus - Humming]
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[interlude]

[Bridge]
Ti limyè mwen, premye fwa ou te kriye (Mm mm hmm mm mm hmm | mm mm mm mm hmm)
Mwen te ba ou kè mwen pou w jwe avè l (mm mm mm mm mm hmm | mm mm hmm mm hmm)

Ti limyè mwen, dezyèm fwa ou te kriye (Mm mm hmm mm mm hmm | mm mm mm mm hmm)
Mwen ba ou zepòl mwen pou m siye je w (mm mm mm hmm | mm mm hmm hmm)

Ti limyè mwen, twazyèm fwa ou te kriye (Mm mm hmm mm mm hmm | mm mm mm mm hmm)
Mwen te ba ou men m pou m kite w ale (mm mm mm hmm | mm mm hmm hmm)

[Chorus - Hook][Duet]
Mwen kite w ale
Mwen kite w ale
Mwen kite w ale
I let you go-o-o
I let you go-o-o
I let you go

[Outro]
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Mwen kite w ale